Instead of recapping like I normally do, I thought I would put some of my favorite lines from last night's session (I won't include the complete poem, just in case some were worried about others copying their work). If anybody would like to add their favorite lines or comment on my favorites, please feel free.
Patrick: "The disturbing part / Is that it sometimes itches / And it sometimes pains / Man it can pain / So it's not very fair / Especially at the first / To gave that spooky tense scare ..."
Teri: "I've worked / hard enough / it's funtime / that's overdue."
Cheryl: "Husband retires / Lots of free time ahead ..."
John S.: "Like the Walmart Greeter on meds / Dressed in vest of retail red / Grins ear-to-ear showing teeth / Between the consumer the addiction / And the cheap imported relief ..."
Diana: "I could barely catch my breath at the conclusion / I was in a state of shock and mild confusion."
Plus Don did a spoken word performance of one of his poems and also read one that he had revised from last month's meeting.
All in all, it was great to see everyone and hear what they've been working on. Diana said she might even bring lemon bars next month- that would be the price of attending!
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